Hayley Milliman
Marketing and Customer Support Ninja
Published Oct 20, 2018

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The Merriam-Webster Dictionary defines exposition as "a setting forth of the meaning or purpose".

You, young writer, begin writing a story. You have your characters, your setting, your plot – you can’t wait to paint a picture with your words.

Caution, young writer! There is a simple truth to writing that must be considered before you begin putting your masterpiece on the page.

Contents:

  1. Exposition
  2. The Dos and Don’ts of Exposition
  3. In Summary

Exposition

Any and all storytelling requires exposition – the explanation of how Character X got from Point A to Point B and then later to Point C.

In other words, exposition provides crucial information about the characters, their motives and the setting of your story. Expository writing is often criticised for over-explaining a situation, yet it’s one of the most important aspects of all writing genres.

Good writing is actually the same thing as good exposition. Expository passages are where you cultivate your voice, and there are many ways to successfully “‘set forth the meaning and purpose” of your story.

Here is a famous example:

Two households, both alike in dignity
In fair Verona, where we lay our scene
From ancient grudge break to new mutiny,
Where civil blood makes civil hands unclean.

Shakespeare is a master of exposition, as you can see from the above excerpt from Romeo and Juliet.

From these four lines (which combine to complete one single sentence) we learn where the play is set (Verona, Italy), the background of the characters in the tale (wealthy, civilized,) and the very basic premise of the conflict (warring households).

The other key aspect of this example is that it leaves plenty to be revealed. We don’t know who the central characters are exactly, and we don’t know what violent event erupts from the conflict – but we want to!

The expository nature of the opening lines of the play set the scene, and pique our interest in the story.

The Dos and Don’ts of Exposition

When writing exposition there are some simple “dos” and “don’ts”.

DO use vivid descriptions to relay important information to your reader.

DO use dialogue as a way to explore character motive and conflict.

DO use the actions of your characters to tell the story.

DON’T over-explain the actions and situations your characters find themselves in.

DON’T explain everything at once, rather let your story unfold organically.

In Summary

As you can see, exposition is critically important to master when writing a story.

You may have multi-dimensional characters and a riveting plot, but without expository writing skills, you are lost. Without exposition, the story you want to tell is just a jumble of random things that happen.

The broadness of expository writing gives you a chance to play with style, voice and intention. You can find your voice in your exposition, instead of losing your characters in a meandering tale that only makes sense inside your head.

Explore, play, have fun! Keep your story moving forward – your writing will follow.

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Hayley Milliman
Marketing and Customer Support Ninja

Hayley is a former teacher turned writer who works for ProWritingAid as a marketing and customer support associate. Hayley loves writing content that's engaging and informative. Bonus points if it's about Star Wars.

Gracias muy bueno para un principiante como yo. Maximiliano Araya C

By develasquez.2014 on 22 October 2018, 08:40 PM

I wish this was explained with more examples like 1 paragraph lacking exposition and then the same implemented with exposition or a situation.

By rashminarrates on 14 November 2018, 02:13 PM